mindmaster123's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Flash]

Good but missing something

Good use of green I like the caravel-shaped face of the moon but you should work on the clouds in my opinion should be more frothy and not so lumpy.

Luwano responds:

Yeah the clouds are really not convincing and satisfying, I completely agree.

What do you mean with caravel-shaped face? It's supposed to be a skull and googling "caravel" only brought up some type of ship.

I'm confused.... ^^

[Art trade with Kashi]

Good

Good character design with a cool look and I love the details on the arms, eyes and pumpkins besides that sickle its appearance of weathered rock is just great.

Fifty-50 responds:

The character isn't mine though. It came from a user named Kakashi1930.

[Unfounded rage]

Amazing

Excellent overview of the scene with a simple design but well made.

This is the first time I see this style in your drawings and personally I like but I think you can improve in terms of detail and to create more complex scenarios.

Impkid responds:

I will!, i think that is the next level to reach! thank's again mindmaster

[Space Brute]

Solid

I like the design is solid and looks well made.

But I notice some irregularity in the eye seems that one is above the other but I think the perspective is what causes this effect.

thomahawk responds:

Good you noticed. I did have some trouble with symmetry. I wasn't really sure if i should post it, but i liked the design enough to do it anyway.

Thanks for the honest review!

[The Monocular]

jajajaaaaaaa

Simple but effective

serves as get a laugh to any.

Pillowmint responds:

Thank you, I wanted to keep it pretty simple

[shock baby]

Good

Interesting design with excellent color and a good range of details. Personally, I liked the eyes that glow coming from them is pure love.

datamouth responds:

thanks man. yeah i had fun making the eyes and mouth. like drawing shiny things. thanks again for the critique!

[Itsah]

Good

I like the design very effective for the type of character you are representing with some appropriate colors and a good range of detail.

But it's a shame you do not have a suitable background and I imagine in the midst of a battle or playing extreme hockey.

ZombieRod responds:

i was trying to make a background, but the program crashed so many times that i just gave up

[Pond of Wonder]

Some complaints

I like the scene you tried to create but you have serious problems with the accuracy of the drawings and the color range is poorly balanced.

For example if you see the tree that is on the left you can notice a large irregularity in shape and color is not exactly the best. It would have been better if you had a combination of black and green which would give a sense of depth in the image.

So I recommend that before you paint any picture you draw it on paper first, to choose where to stay every shadow, every element, and each color experience and see that this is before you do the final work.

But you have talent alone you need to work on precision, practice much and experiment more with the scenes until you find your own way to combine things.

I wish you luck and continuous improvement.

Joshsouza responds:

I always sketch out my painting before painting it. My camera didn't capture the right color of that tree.

[faithful assistant]

Cute

Good character with a style of drawing solid but simple with good lighting and I like the color of the skin especially on the cheeks and the light reflex of the eye.

I would like to see it in full body.

PixelCake responds:

Thank you so much :) with a little more practice I can submit full bodies in this style

[PTM vs. Deadpool Color]

Good

Certainly the final version looks much better than before the colors are very appropriate and the drawing style is simple but does not detract from details.

But I would like to see a union between the head and body that black area may be replaced by a union between the skin and bread to name one example.

TheKillustrator responds:

That makes total sense to me. I found it to be a glaring problem with the original, too. But hell, it's not supposed to be perfect I guess, though I don't think it would be a big issue to photoshop out.