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[200th DRAWING ON NG]

Congratulations ;)

I like the positions of the characters even though Dad is a little dark missing
something more than color.

Congratulations and continued good work.

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks mate i know what you mean about dad

[Fractal Madness Clown]

Some complaints

I like but I think you should put more attention to the nose and this is very deformed face and nose is incredible off-the work you have done this take on a fractal.

But try to make a more rounded figure by removing the body and opening a little mouth, the eyes are well made but I think they are too far into the face and become two points in the space.

UriahTWolfe responds:

Thanks for the advice! I was contemplating not even doing eyes, but then for some reason decided they worked better for other reasons. But to make it more truly "madness-like", yeah, I think I need to follow your suggestions. I'll definitely factor them in if/when I do a rework of this particular clown. Thanks again! :-)

[DMT]

Good

I like the different ways that are within the image and the wide range of colors just makes it more attractive and the lighting around the center is very good it seems as if all the light come out of that place.

NefedovStorm responds:

thanks a lot man, i really appreciate it.
it used to be a much darker image and had no flare
I'm glad you like the lights

[.: Fragile]

Good BUT

nteresting perspective of the character with a good range of colors in my opinion
the naturalness of the clouds surrounding the planet is quite good but I think you should take a little more attention to the other planets, because they seem that they are glued to the image.

Goddess-ofthe-Night responds:

yes, this version you see is the 'pilot' version of the one i'm working on now, so I consider your critique ;3
They seem to me too that they are glued, but those planets have no atmosphere.
So I have to figure out how to make it less glueie XD

thanks :D

[ogre magi vs. orc warrior]

Good character BUT

I like the perspective that drew the battle, with good characters and lots of details I see you have improved in the creation of metal flashing with just seeing the hatchet and I can check back the orc.

Having a neutral scenario loses a bit of magic would have been magnificent in the middle of a dungeon or an arena that would be something more interesting.

I imagine this in an animation ............... Pure slaughter.

jouste responds:

hey great feedback.

thanks for dropping by with a comment and a highscore. i always liked the thought of these battles.

*highfives*

[Cordelia, Yvette, and Max]

Good character BUT

I like the irregular shape having in the drawing, they are perfect with your style, but would like to see the whole body of max and not just your faceand you think you have to work a little Yvette's eyes as they find that are far from the nose (or perhaps my perspective).

Luxembourg responds:

I don't really know why I had Max cropped off like that. I intended to have him sitting down, but I don't think I got that across. He just looks a little awkward like that. You've got a big point there.
As for Yvette's eyes, I never thought about that, but I guess you might be right. They're a tad too high.
Thanks for yet another review.

[Megaplex Tree]

Excellent atmosphere

A lot of details the city, rain, ilumination and character make a beautiful setting, but would like to see a more defined way that illuminates the sky is not whether a building or a giant ship.

Kamikaye responds:

thats up to you ;) Was just a test, I mainly focused on the foreground platform here.

[Slicing Wind]

Solid BUT

A solid and simple design well-crafted but lack of detail especially in the claws that could have an effect on wear.

Undeadkitty13 responds:

i see what you're talking about i could have add some nics or some jagged edges
thanks

[Monster Monday]

Good

Very good design of the monster many details and a good use of the range of gray in his eyes an appropriate scenario and a victim more than perfect.

YannuNG responds:

Thanx a lot, I'll try to make something as good next day !

[City of Masks- 4]

I want more

This story interested me a lot but I think you should take your time and complete as anything but throw a pity that artists can not upload full comic at one time would be very useful to make a comic and not have to upload 24 images one by one .

I have no criticism to the characters because I take as a simple sketch (but that does not mean they are bad but you can do something else done with them).

Luxembourg responds:

Yeah, I kind of feel like nobody will get the point of the story as a whole if it's done in increments, but there's not much else to do.
I am taking my time. I don't want to burn myself out, and I'm trying to make the art on each page a little better than the last page in some way. I don't feel like there's any rush, so I'm doing this as I see fit.
As for the characters, we're still at the point of introducing them and setting the story up. I have one more smaller character and one more major character to introduce (since this story isn't going to be some long-term, ongoing thing, I've already planned much of the story out and it mostly revolves around these three and one more. I can't imagine it being more than 50 pages total when finished, but we'll see) before we've got our main cast and I can start really fleshing everybody out.
I hope I got what you're saying here, because I'm not entirely sure. Glad you like it, though. Thanks for the comment.