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[Fractal Madness Clown]

Some complaints

I like but I think you should put more attention to the nose and this is very deformed face and nose is incredible off-the work you have done this take on a fractal.

But try to make a more rounded figure by removing the body and opening a little mouth, the eyes are well made but I think they are too far into the face and become two points in the space.

UriahTWolfe responds:

Thanks for the advice! I was contemplating not even doing eyes, but then for some reason decided they worked better for other reasons. But to make it more truly "madness-like", yeah, I think I need to follow your suggestions. I'll definitely factor them in if/when I do a rework of this particular clown. Thanks again! :-)

[PIXELSTEIN]

jajajaaaaaaa

Very detailed, I like how it looks but is missing a foot and right hand like a hook.

That if the expression on her face is priceless ;)

[DMT]

Good

I like the different ways that are within the image and the wide range of colors just makes it more attractive and the lighting around the center is very good it seems as if all the light come out of that place.

NefedovStorm responds:

thanks a lot man, i really appreciate it.
it used to be a much darker image and had no flare
I'm glad you like the lights

[.: Fragile]

Good BUT

nteresting perspective of the character with a good range of colors in my opinion
the naturalness of the clouds surrounding the planet is quite good but I think you should take a little more attention to the other planets, because they seem that they are glued to the image.

Goddess-ofthe-Night responds:

yes, this version you see is the 'pilot' version of the one i'm working on now, so I consider your critique ;3
They seem to me too that they are glued, but those planets have no atmosphere.
So I have to figure out how to make it less glueie XD

thanks :D

[Elika-Halloween2010]

Solid

I like the character looks well made with a lot of details besides the constrained between light and shadow is well defined.

[ogre magi vs. orc warrior]

Good character BUT

I like the perspective that drew the battle, with good characters and lots of details I see you have improved in the creation of metal flashing with just seeing the hatchet and I can check back the orc.

Having a neutral scenario loses a bit of magic would have been magnificent in the middle of a dungeon or an arena that would be something more interesting.

I imagine this in an animation ............... Pure slaughter.

jouste responds:

hey great feedback.

thanks for dropping by with a comment and a highscore. i always liked the thought of these battles.

*highfives*

[Temperance]

Beautiful

Magnificent scenery very well detailed and full of tranquility and peace, the character is well designed and with proper lighting in the water and the other elements which give a touch of naturalness and realism.

[Cordelia, Yvette, and Max]

Good character BUT

I like the irregular shape having in the drawing, they are perfect with your style, but would like to see the whole body of max and not just your faceand you think you have to work a little Yvette's eyes as they find that are far from the nose (or perhaps my perspective).

Luxembourg responds:

I don't really know why I had Max cropped off like that. I intended to have him sitting down, but I don't think I got that across. He just looks a little awkward like that. You've got a big point there.
As for Yvette's eyes, I never thought about that, but I guess you might be right. They're a tad too high.
Thanks for yet another review.

[Matara Eurobombastica]

Good

I like the design of a shady character with great care especially in the blades which gives the effect of shining metal.